Pitch Protection

My pitch for the music video 'Protection' by Massive Attack. 

My pitch is about a little girl, who is about seven years old...she is depressed, feels lonely and unwanted,as she's an victim of child abuse. The location i want to use is a dark bedroom and small park with a lake, as i want to create a dull environment. My music video will be based on both Narrative and Performance.The performance is going to be a solo of a women singer in a white dress. Like an 'Angel' The singer is a ghost that the little girl can not see. However the little girl is the childhood of the singer, and though this song she is telling her self that she is her own guardian angel. The dress symbolize this...

  The narrative is basically about singer telling her childhood self that she will protect her,as she has done it before 'I have leaned on me for years, now you can lean on me'. The singer and her childhood self then see each other at the end of the music video,never the less instead of saying something they walk right past each other without a word. As if they they know each other but do not recognize because they are two very different people now.
         
I can compare my pitch to Avril Lavigne's music video 'smile' where she walks around picking up glass, and people around her could not see her. 
But 'smile' when she picks the broken glass pieces.